My shaking feet were perched on the edge of a picture perfect air ship. I stumbled back gasping for air "how did I survive that?" "I have no idea!" a gruff confused voice replied. I nearly leapt off the ship in surprise and yanked out her space gun. Spinning around to see a group of innocent scared people letting out screams and diving to the ground for cover "oh um sorry, don't worry!". Everyone stayed still tho. "This is going to be a long day!"
My eyes adjusted to the harsh glare of the sunlight as I stepped through the mysterious abyss that I had now familiarised myself with. The senic views filtered into perspective. "Ahhh, I'm goanna die" filtered through my head as I fell to an enevitable ... then I felt ... felt ... solid ground!
My shaking feet were perched on the edge of a picture perfect air ship. I stumbled back gasping for air "how did I survive that?" "I have no idea!" a gruff confused voice replied. I nearly leapt off the ship in surprise and yanked out her space gun. Spinning around to see a group of innocent scared people letting out screams and diving to the ground for cover "oh um sorry, don't worry!". Everyone stayed still tho. "This is going to be a long day!"
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Inez
7/22/2015 12:00:23 pm
I didn't understand most of the wordsw but some I new were good ones!!!
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Lucy
7/22/2015 12:09:18 pm
Really descriptive but you need to work on grammar but that's not that big of a deal!
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Hi Liam,
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Liam C
8/15/2015 03:43:30 pm
Thanks Mia! Yea not finished just a start and I think I've fixed the spelling (I hope!)
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