Creeping through the woods silently, peering at the tops of the trees for this so called immortal monkey. Twigs and leaves snapping, crunching under foot, wincing every time the noise echoed throughout the otherwise silent jungle. I saw a flash of white near a bunch of scarlet juicy berries high in a tree. I raised my rifle and took careful aim through the scope and with a CRACK I pulled the trigger and the bullet whistled away. It was a perfect shot through the heart and the monkey fell of the branch and hit the ground, dead.I approached the spot where the monkey had fallen behind a log to find he wasn't there! I reached behind the log to make sure. I was starting to panic where was he? But as I withdrew my hand it erupted in searing pain. I looked at it and there were black spots on it! Then my other hand blossomed with burning pain and sprouted black spots I then started convulsing and fell to the ground. My whole body went into burning pain black spots were all over me then I stopped, I was all right then I looked at my body and I realised what had happened I was the monkey.
Maia
8/12/2015 11:40:56 am
Good-work Sammy! It hooked me in the entire time! You could make it a bit longer, and go just a bit more in depth in the middle of it. But either way good work! :)
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xavier
8/12/2015 12:09:24 pm
I liked the description and you had me hooked in the whole thing. I thought that in parts it was funny. Good job.
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